Journal
5/2/450
Dear diary,
Today the king’s priest came into my home and, upon seeing
me, began to jump up and down and rejoice. I thought that he was quite an odd
man; however, he informed me that I was going to be prince Siddhartha’s wife. I
mean, who ever said that I wanted to be married? I don’t even know the guy. I’m
more interested in enjoying my twenties as a free spirit.
-G
5/5/450
Dear diary,
People in the city are making such a big deal about prince
Siddhartha! Just today I was informed that all young girls were to travel to
the palace on Saturday in order to receive gifts from the guy. Me? Yeah, I’m
going to show up late and act like I totally don’t care.
-G
5/7/450
Dear diary,
So, I did just as I said I’d do; I was the last one to show
up at the palace. Siddhartha tried giving me a ring. All I could think was
that, “He must like it if he wants to put a ring on it.” I didn’t want to take
it – after all, I’m not in to pretention. A ring that nice would surely draw all sorts of attention to
me.
-G
5/8/450
Dear diary,
The stinking king of Kapilavastu showed up at our doorstep today
asking my dad to permit Siddhartha to marry me. Why am I not able to have any
say in this? Luckily, my dad said the prince had been nothing but a sloth thus
far in his life and he didn’t know if he could permit my marriage to such a
man.
-G
5/15/450
Dear diary,
Great – just because my dad called out the prince for his
lethargic nature, there is going to be a city-wide competition to prove that
Siddhartha isn’t lazy after all. I think it’s actually somewhat amusing that
these boys are all going to compete for my hand in marriage. This afternoon is
going to be interesting.
-G
5/16/450
Dear diary,
Well, the first challenger to Siddhartha was an artsy-type.
He wanted to compete with the prince in a ‘write-off,’ but Visvamitra stepped
in and declared Siddhartha the victor before anyone had even done as much as
pick up a pen. Next up was a mathematical match-up. Siddhartha won that one,
too. I was actually pretty glad at that because the other competitor was a
pocket-protected prim.
-G
5/20/450
Dear diary,
It has been arranged. I’m marrying Siddhartha. I hope that I
like this guy. I haven’t even had the chance to sit down and converse.
I’ll surely be back
in the next few days to write about what I think about the prince once I
formally meet him.
-G
Author’s note: I wrote this story in first person to describe
how Gopa may have felt during the process of Siddhartha winning her hand in
marriage. The unit itself didn’t include much about Gopa other than her dream.
I found that a bit odd, so I wanted to expand upon her character here. This
section of the unit focused on what Siddhartha and his father had to do in
order for Siddhartha to marry Gopa. I should also mention that Siddhartha is
the name of the man who would go on to become ‘Buddha.’ I didn’t change
anything as far as plot, but I did include much more of Gopa’s thoughts. Link
to the story: http://www.sacred-texts.com/bud/lob/lob09.htm
Bibliography: The Life of Buddha, by Ferdinand Herold. 1922.
Hey again Lance,
ReplyDeleteFirst off what really drew me in was that your story was a diary. I think that with a story being a diary it gives you a sense of detail into someone else’s life and that is really intriguing. I haven’t used that style in my writing yet and I think that it is great style to utilize. Overall I really enjoyed your story. Great job!
Hey Lance!
ReplyDeleteFirst off, I found it interesting how you wrote your story in the form of a diary. It really gives us insight and perception into Gopa’s inner thoughts and feelings. It’s a great way to provide a whole lot of detail for a particular writing. I really enjoyed reading you story. I think I may try writing my next storytelling assignment as a diary!
Hey Lance! I love this! Absolutely fantastic! I think you did an excellent job of capturing the true nature and feelings Gopa was dealing with. It was a great way to keep your story short and concise while still including a lot of details. It was also a very cute story. Great job! Keep up the good work!
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